Twenty- five Seven

Personally speaking

Breakfast at Seven #Bar-a-thon

At precisely 7.30, Samantha got out of her car and  walked into the club, eager to jump on the treadmill . She looked around the verandah, happy to be the only person up so early in the morning. She loved having the club all to herself. Suddenly she spied a handbag on one of the sofas in the verandah. Oh no! she thought as she recognised it  as  Reena’s . And soon she saw Reena herself, slouching deep into the sofa.

Wow! That was early by Reena’s standards too! She  wondered what brought her out of her home so early in the day. Then she remembered, Ashok had gone out of town and the kids were away on Summer Camp. Still, 7.30 was unusual for Reena. On a day like this she would have enjoyed a lazy day in bed…..

Then, she saw him, trying to light his cigarette, a little distance away. Reena was looking towards him,  trying to catch his attention as she waved the bell to call the waiter. The man looked up, from his cigarette and took in a deep breath. Letting out a smoke ring, he said, “Oh just a cup of coffee.”

“What about some akuri on toast? It’s quite good here.”

“No that’s enough. We don’t have much time do we? ” he said looking at his watch. “I’ll have to be off soon.”

Samantha took in this conversation and slipped away from the side passage, before Reena could spot her. Her mind began whirring….So, you slimey b*&^% she thought, a secret assignation! And as she climbed on the treadmill, her mind  moved even faster. She was dying to ring up Geeta and Alisha and the rest of the gang. How they would love to know that the sanctimonious Ms. Reena Bhatia was meeting a strange MAN. And that too early in the morning!

 

Reena patted down the sofa and told Rakesh to sit next to her. It was a long time since she had met her little brother. And they had a lot to talk about before she dropped him off to the station.

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17 responses to “Breakfast at Seven #Bar-a-thon”

  1. Oh this was a great read Sunita. “The fault in our thoughts” right??

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  2. Good story, Sunita.
    Just wanted to read on till the end, waiting for the twist

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    1. Thanks Nilu .glad you stopped by

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  3. I am sure Geeta and Alisha will sort Samantha out :D Enjoyed the twist :D

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    1. There are lots of people who jump to conclusions ?

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      1. Thanks for stopping by Anamika. I will put up the linky soon. I’m a bit tied up with all the bank work ( AADHAR and year end financial statements)

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  4. Gossipers. It was a healthy twist in the end, I would say. I couldn’t find your post in the linky on the Blog-A-Rhythm’s Day 2 post’s page. Do leave your linky there too.

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  5. Naughty rendevouz are the best- for the ones indulging in it and the ones judging it too! But I say live and let live though your take on the prompt is damn neat :-)

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    1. Hmmm…… that’s food for thought. In the 80’s the Taj Mahal Hotel had a rooftop restaurant called Rendezvous which used to cause quite a confusion and ‘raised’ eyebrows when you said you were going to the Rendezvous

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  6. Hahaha! Caught me by surprise! We do expect the worst don’t we? Despite knowing a person’s background, we tend to be hasty and jump to conclusions over what we percieve as slip-ups in the perfect facade. Nicely done Sunita!

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    1. Yes, jump the gun. Thanks for stopping by.

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    2. Thanks Kala . I’m enjoying this challenge

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  7. A great read, and so well written! I really enjoyed.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by and am really glad you enjoyed it. I hope you are having great weather and look forward to your interesting summer posts!

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  8. Seriously!!! How people judge others. Nicely done.

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    1. Glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by

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