• How to tell a story

    Thanks for stopping by.

    I have been following Write Tribe which has been following 7 Days to Rediscover your blogging groove by Darren Rowse and today is the last day.

    This past week has been a week of learning; a week where I learnt the importance of several blogging points I’ve been assiduously missing.

    The last prompt for this extremely enlightening exercise is Telling a Story

    I hope you enjoy the story of the crow and the sparrow – a  folk tale we’ve used for generations  to put our children to sleep or keep entertained while feeding them (yes, I can see your eyebrows going up in  disapproval but sometimes it is a clever way of getting little ones to eat!)

    The Clever Little Sparrow.

    Once upon a time (I love stories that begin like this) there was a crow who had a house made of straw and a sparrow whose house was made of wax. The two of them were neighbours and were friends who said hello to one another every day.


    One night there was a huge rain storm with strong winds blowing and the crow’s house was washed away. It was still raining and the crow was getting wet. He didn’t know what to do so he went to his neighbour the sparrow and asked if he could come in.


    “Sparrow, sprarrow please open the door?” he asked in a plaintive voice


    “Wait a bit, I’ll just get the bath running for my baby.”


    The crow waited a while and his teeth began to chatter so he said ” Sparrow, sparrow, please do open the door.”


    “Hang on a sec, I’m just getting the baby dressed”.


    By now it was raining really hard and the crow was beginning to feel hungry and miserable. “Sparrow, sparrow, can’t you please let me in?”


    “Be patient Crow, I have to get my baby’s porridge.”


    Hearing this, the crow began to feel his tummy rumble and he said ,”Please, please, please, I’m feeling hungry too! Can’t you please open the door?”


    “Just wait, I’m getting the mess cleaned up and I’ll answer the door.”


    The crow waited for another five minutes and was really beginning to shiver. His voice began to quiver when he whispered, “I c a a a a n’t re a a  a a ly w w w wait. Ple e a a se l e e t m me in.”


    Finally the sparrow said what the crow wanted to hear all along “Ok. I’ll let you in,” and she opened the door. 


    The crow stepped in and the sparrow greeted him with a hug. But behind her was a lit up piece of firewood and which she put to the crow’s tail. The crow felt something hot and he realised his tail was on fire. He quickly ran out to douse it!





    This story can be varied with several excuses making it long enough for the child to fall asleep or finish eating so it encourages a lot of ingenuity on the part of the story teller.  I love this story which has no fixed format. Like all folk tales, it contains a moral which can also be modified to teach the child a lesson he needs to be taught for instance, being unprepared for eventualities, being too trusting , so on and so forth.

    The oral tradition

    Every culture has a rich tradition of story telling with folk tales that are passed on from generation to generation. The characters are people or animals children can relate to and are simple to narrate. Most times the story teller has just a framework to begin with  and the opportunity to embellish it with elements that will engage the child. What fun it is to watch a child’s reaction : amazement, surprise, happiness, sorrow, terror or even pure joy as the story unfolds.

    I love telling stories. Do you?

    What is your favourite folk tale?

    My blogging journey is like the tale of the clever sparrow – it never ends. With each blogger I interact with, I learn something new .   

    This week I learnt a lot.. Thank you Write Tribe and Darren Rowse!

  • Every morning I go straight to my computer to find out the prompt on Write Tribe
    Today’s was

    On Day 6 – we follow Darren Rowse’s post.
    Ask a Question 

    So my question today is

    What is the favourite part of your day? 

    This morning when I woke up, I found that the air was slightly cooler. It was slightly crisper and I actually felt happy to be awake.

    The whole house was sleeping and when I looked out the window, I found the rest of the world was sleeping too. It looked so peaceful from my balcony to see the lights slowly coming on one by one in the different houses around.

    Soon the morning sounds began to make themselves heard. Newspapers being pushed under the doors, milk bags being slipped into bags hanging outside, cycle bells of delivery boys announcing the delivery of fresh bread and eggs, and in the midst of this all, sounds of the birds waking up to a new day.

    As the eastern sky lights up with the rising sun, the noises will intensify with delivery trucks rattling down the road laden with stuff that needs to be delivered, school buses will start rumbling , cars filled with people will start zooming, starting early to beat the morning  rush.  Gradually school bells will start ringing, horns will start honking and the world will start getting on with another busy day.

    But till then I will sit down in my comfortable armchair, sip my hot cup of coffee, glance through the papers and savour the best part of my day …….. a brand new morning.

    So I repeat my question : what is the favourite part of your day?

    Is it when your baby nuzzles up to you and says good morning?

    Is it when you get ready for work?

    Is it when your family sits down for their evening meal?

    Is it when you go shopping for your daily bread?

    Is it when you wait at the bus stop watching people go by?

    Is it when you relax in your last yoga pose?

  • So 
    You blog about a specific topic
    You blog with authority
    You blog almost every day
    You try to be engaging, endearing, funny and even smart
    You interact with other bloggers and actively participate in discussions
    You link up with other blogs 
    Your website is uncluttered 

    Yet are you one of those many bloggers who find themselves having just under 50 visitors each day despite following all the tips of building a successful blog?
    A photomontage of what a whole iceberg might l...
     (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

    Well do not despair because we are all icebergs floating in the ocean, and remember there’s just a tip that floats above the water while the rest of us remain underwater for the most part of our blog lives.But this doesn’t mean that you have to sit around and mope feeling sorry for yourself because remember, you are blogging because you

    • LIKE TO WRITE  
    • YOU WANT TO BE PUBLISHED

    So my tip for better blogging is 

    Forget targets
    Forget goals
    Forget so many tips you’ve read and will read
    WRITE 
    because you want to write

      I’m linking this post to Write Tribe and Darren Rowses’ Write a Tip Post – Rediscover your Blogging Groove Day 5

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