• Playing Tag

    One of our members Kunal made this logo

    Chapter 1 Room No.4

    Chapter 2  Table No 4

    Chapter 3  If Looks Could Kill

    Chapter 4 The Flower That Never Bloomed

    Chapter 5  The Elephant Parade

    Chapter 6 Chance Encounters and Changed Plans

    Chapter 7  Relationships

    Chapter 8 When Dreams Came True

    Chapter 9  The Runaway Brat

    BlogAdda has come up with a wonderful way to engage bloggers while CelebrateBlogging. As mentioned earlier, our team is one of 29 teams ( maybe even more) participating in a contest where all of us have to spin a yarn using all five characters pre-determined by Blogadda.

    It has been fun interacting with different bloggers, particularly on my team which has turned out to be a great mix of young and matured bloggers. Read the story as it unfolds so far and watch out for the last chapter which will be posted up today.

    This post is my entry for the Write Tribe Pro Blogger September Challenge too!

  • I honestly didn’t want to crib today because I hate the way I’m turning into a perennial grumbler. But honestly today I just have to vent.And yes, it is about my washing machine.

    After four working days of waiting for a technician to show up, I finally called Siemens’ Customer Service in utter disgust and raised my voice and changed the tone of my complaint. Something must have registered because by 4.30 this evening someone showed up. Of course before coming, he forewarned me about the service charge but this is pretty much ridiculous because anyone whose machine is not working would like to find out why even if there was a price for this service ( which frankly speaking should be free).

    Well, I’ve notice one peculiar trait about all machines under warranty or guarantee or whatever, which is that the moment the warranty period is over, the machine breaks down. I think all manufacturers have done some kind of a statistical survey on the period of trouble free service before they arrive upon a suitable warranty period because every machine without fail follows this pattern of auto-breakdown the minute the warranty is over!

    What was more shocking than this expected fact was that the part that was to be replaced would cost all of Rs.9000 which Anna Shetty assured me was ridiculous considering that the machine originally cost me Rs.25,000 which meant that I spent Rs. 12500 a year ( the machine is only two years old) and that I’d be foolish to spend another Rs.9000 for a part which only came with a one month warranty. Considering my theory that all machines/parts only work for the period they are guaranteed for, this would be even more foolish than spending Rs. 12500/ year because this would mean a monthly expenditure of Rs.9000 ( for which price I could employ two part timers to wash clothes twice a day!).

    But what was more amazing was that the moment I said that I refused to pay even a penny more, the technician called his manager and asked if they could replace the part for free. Seeing my anger dissipate, he then quietly mentioned that perhaps I could get a discount. And what he said in almost a whisper was that the part may not be available!

    Which brings me to the main lesson of today – buyers beware.

    DO NOT EVER, EVER BUY A SIEMENS MACHINE. 

    Thus endeth the lesson.

    This is my post for the Write Tribe ProBlogger September Challenge

  • The Spellbinders

    Read the previous parts of the story here:

    Chapter 1- Room no.4 by Ankita Singhal

    Chapter 2 – Table no. 4 by Bushra M

    Chapter 3 – If Looks Could Kill by Ryan Fernandes

    Chapter 4-  The Flower That Never Bloomed by Kunal Borah

    CHAPTER 5 THE ELEPHANT PARADE

    Tara took a quick glance in the mirror before she let
    herself out. She was pleased with what she saw; 
    her hair was perfectly in place – thank God she hadn’t allowed Bomsi to
    experiment with a new hair style – and she looked the epitome of chic in her black
    skinny fit jeans, the silver grey Pashmina flung carelessly over her  shoulders and her black stiletto booties and
    low slung bag. Gosh ! Jaipur was cold she thought, rubbing her hands and
    blowing into them,  especially compared
    to the coldest Mumbai day which never really got cold.
    “ Ready Roohi?”
    Roohi nodded, barely able to mask her excitement.  How she loved watching her mother dress, the
    way she put her makeup ever so carefully, adding just the hint of colour to her
    pale cheeks and outlining her dark eyes with smoky kajal. She looked like a
    dream.How she wished she could be like her mother – smart and sophisticated. Oh,
    but she forgot! She was working with
    Mama today.
    “We’ll take a busman’s holiday,” Tara had assured her as she
    booked a ticket for the two of them online.
    “Why can’t Daddy come too?” questioned Roohi, a bit
    disappointed that Mama would be combining work with pleasure.
    “Beta, this is not a real
    holiday. We’ll go on a real holiday all of us together soon.”
    “Really, Mama?”
    “Of course. Really. Promise.”
    “Then why are you taking me if this is not a real holiday?”
    “Because I want you all to myself sweetie. Just you and
    me.”
    It was a call from the principal’s office three weeks
    earlier that made Tara take this decision. It was a reality check on how she
    had to spend more time with Roohi if she wanted to get her on the right track.
    Pranks were pranks but they could get out of hand. She recalled all the shenanigans
    that Roohi  had come up with all these
    years : the day she came home finding her room inundated with Chanel no5. And
    Roohi   holding the empty bottle in the basin “ I
    wanted to get the bubble in the bottle but it escaped….Mama,” she wailed .  Or the time when she woke up to find a raw egg
    on her face! “I wanted to see what you would do!” she guilelessly told her
    mother when she woke up with fright. Gradually she became bolder and would try
    things like scaring old people in the building by shouting out boo while they
    were walking round the corner. How she loved seeing their surprised shocked
    faces. And she loved annoying Mrs. Panthaky by dancing on the chalk designs
    outside her front door. She also loved pressing all the buttons in the lift
    before getting out so that the next person had to stop on every floor. Or even
    locking the neighbours’ front door so that they couldn’t get out! All these
    harmless pranks earned her the reputation of a prankster and trouble maker. Some
    of the residents in the building found it cute but Mrs. Panthaky actually
    called her a junglee and said that Tara had better watch out because her
    daughter had all the makings of a terrorist!
    But this last call from Roohi’s school  took the cake. YTV was going in a new
    direction and Darius had asked his producers to think out of the box. Whilst in
    the middle of the presentation that would take her places, her incessant
    buzzing mobile forced her to leave the meeting and make a quick trip to
    school.  Even now, thinking of that call
    made her blood run cold. Mrs. Pinto, the school counselor had told her to get
    Roohi’s eyes checked as soon as possible. She was complaining about seeing
    double in class and all the students started saying the same thing. It was very
    disrupting for the teachers and the counselor thought it was just the child’s
    way of demanding her mother’s attention. Luckily Tara managed an appointment
    with Dr. Desai the pre-eminent ophthalmologist who corroborated with the
    counselor.

    “There’s nothing clinically wrong with your daughter’s eyesight, Mrs. Dutta,”
    he had assured her. “It’s just severe stress and tension that is causing her to
    see double. I suggest you spend more time with her. The problem will automatically
    go away.”
    So when Darius asked her to cover the Elephant
    Festival in Jaipur she jumped at the chance. Even the school authorities agreed
    to let Roohi off from school for two days and Tara looked forward to these two
    days of intense bonding with her daughter.
    Chal, let’s go ,” she held out her hand to Roohi as
    the two of them made their way outside into the early morning mist of Jaipur . There
    was an air of festivity ,the streets 
    crowded with people waiting to see the elephant parade.
     “Look Mama! There are
    the elephants,” shouted Roohi excitedly  as they approached  those majestic animals dressed resplendently
    in their finest elephant jewelry  with magnificent
    head plates and anklets that jingled at their feet, with their imperial looking
    mahouts sitting in gilded howdahs and velvet brocade blankets as the umbrellas
    danced overhead in the breeze. Indeed they were impressive and Tara began
    clicking on her DSLR to record this wonderful sight. So engrossed was she in
    taking photos that she didn’t realize Roohi had slipped away. Suddenly there
    was a commotion as the parade came to a halt.
    Within seconds, there was a huge crowd that gathered in
    front of her. She heard the screams of a child and a scramble of feet rushing
    towards the elephants.
    “Stay back, stay back,” urged one of the policemen scared of
    causing a stampede. All of a sudden Tara realized that Roohi was not by her
    side. Once again her hands turned clammy. 
    “It couldn’t be could it?” she thought to herself as she pushed her way
    through the crowd. “Think positive! Think positive!” she admonished herself.
    Bach gayi, bacchi bach gayi,” she heard someone say as Tara beheld her daughter in the arms of a strange man.
    Roohi,” she screamed in panic and ran towards the inert
    form of her daughter.
    “Don’t worry ma’am, “ said a soft gentle voice. “I got her
    in just the nick of time.” Tara looked into the stranger’s vaguely familiar, bespectacled eyes and burst into tears. 



    “Me and my team are participating in ‘Game Of Blogs’ at BlogAdda.com. #CelebrateBlogging with us.”

    TEAM MEMBERS – Ritu LalitFarida Rizwan, Ryan FernandesBhavya Nandakumar,Ankita SinghalBushra MKunal BorahAnkit Mahato, Deepa Dutta & Sunita Rajwade

    Read what happens next  at :
    Chapter 6 : Chance Encounters Changed Plans  By Bhavya Nandkumar
    Chapter 7 : Relationships by Ankit Mahato
    Chapter 8: When Dreams came true  By Deepa Dutta
    Chapter 9 : The Runaway Brat  By Farida Rizwan
    Chapter 10 : Where is Roohi  ByRitu Lalit

    Our Team has entered the second round. Find out what happens to Roohi, the Duttas, Cyrus and Jenny.

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