Sand Dance #FridayFotoFiction

He held out his hand

And she grasped at it  tightly

while he led her to the sand

at the edge of the water where they

Danced.

As they twirled and they swirled , flung their shoes in the air with wild abandon.

Tossed jacket aside,

Wind tousled hair and song in their hearts

Their feet tapped to the beat of a different drummer.

Salty sea sprays , and sand in their toes as they wiggled and wriggled

Exhilerated , once more to be a girl and a boy

He laughed and she giggled

As they looked over their shoulders

At the people they’d left behind at their wedding reception.

Image of Bellybytes

This is my take on this week’s #FridayFotoFiction prompt hosted by Tina and Sirmiri. 


Discover more from Twenty- five Seven

Subscribe to get the latest posts sent to your email.

Comments

16 responses to “Sand Dance #FridayFotoFiction”

  1. Opinionated Mua Avatar

    I couldn’t stop smiling reading every word. Wonderful <3

    Like

    1. Bellybytes Avatar

      Thanks Mua ?

      Like

  2. Mayuri Nidigallu Avatar

    I loved this! Their attitude and the take on the prompt!
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction , Sunita!:)

    Like

    1. Bellybytes Avatar

      Glad you liked it !

      Like

  3. Akshata Avatar

    Thats a wonderful way of making one’s marriage memorable!

    Like

    1. Bellybytes Avatar

      Dancing on the dry sand though is tough!

      Like

  4. Rashi Mital Avatar

    Oh how I wish every couple gets to do this. I feel in a wedding the couple getting married is one the who least enjoys it. Naice take.

    Like

  5. Anagha Yatin (@anagha_yatin) Avatar

    Truly cupid struck! Wish they remain forever, madly in love with each other! A crisp, lovely tale!
    Secretly I wish… I should have done something like this! But cant imagine dancing in 9 yards though… hahaha!
    Fantastic take on the prompt Sunita! You made me jealous…

    Like

    1. Bellybytes Avatar

      ? thanks dear Anagha for your appreciative words ! Made my day

      Like

  6. Natasha Avatar

    Awwww sweet!

    Like

  7. Lavanya Avatar

    I know that boy and girl :) What a sweet take on the prompt.

    Like

    1. Bellybytes Avatar

      Thanks! Glad you liked it

      Like

  8. Meha Avatar

    This was a beautiful story. Great writing, so poetic.

    Like

    1. Bellybytes Avatar

      Thanks for stopping by and appreciating

      Like

  9. Tina Basu Avatar

    aww they are so cute. Lovely story.

    Like

    1. Bellybytes Avatar

      Thanks Tina . Glad you liked it

      Like

Leave a comment

Discover more from Twenty- five Seven

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading

Design a site like this with WordPress.com
Get started